Below are my first development draft of my magazine advert. In order to improve my work I have asked my peers to critise my work.
Below is the feedback I was given:
· I need to say who the 'Special Guest' is going to be, this will make the generic conventions stronger and make it more appealing to the audience.
· Need to include the 'Facebook' and 'Twitter' logo in order to make it a more realistic magazine advert.
· The colours work very well, I like how the black and white contrast with each other and make every stand out more.
· There is a small white line in the key image, this makes the whole product look unprofessional and unattractive.
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