Wednesday 1 May 2013

Magazine advert - Development draft 4

Below is my forth development draft of my magazine advert. I have changed the image back to its orginal image. In order to improve my work further I have asked my peers to critise my work.


Below is the feedback I was given:

·         The album is quite difficult to see behind the logo at the top. I feel that it is being hidden from the audience’s eye.

·         I feel that the album is also quite difficult to see, I think the other reason for this is, the colours blend into each other to much, a black album on a black background.

·         I think that the key image is too bright for the genre you are trying to target.

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